Change the bold words and use words from C in the vocabulary section to make it
sound more academic.
The present study was initially (thought up) in order to
validate a new method of enquiry (by which) genetic
information could be (used) to predict disease. The study
(goes against) the findings of Hill (2009); indeed it would
appear to (show) the (opposite) of what he claimed. It
presents a (rather) different view of the genetic factors
which (cause) disease. (Despite this) , the study does not
(wipe out) Hill’s, as his studies served the (very important)
purpose of devising symbols to (stand for) certain
tendencies, (in this way) facilitating further research.
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