Academic writing 2: structuring an argument
Exercise 33.4
Correct the nine collocation errors in this review of an academic article.
Kerr takes in a controversial position in his
latest article. He gets forward the argument
that differences in behaviour between the
sexes can be explained totally by the genes.
He attempts to do a case for educating
boys and girls separately in their primary
school years. He argues, occasionally
persuadingly , that both sexes would benefit
from this. He pulls attention to recent
research which, he claims, makes support
for his argument. However, he fails to
draw a number of important factors into
consideration. He also gives no reference to
the important work of Potter and Sinclair
in this field. I am sure that I will not be
alone in disagreeing highly with many of
his conclusions.
Over to you
Look up the words theory, research and argument (with its academic meaning) in a good learner’s
dictionary. Make a note of any other interesting collocations that you find.
Answer
Possible collocations are:
revolutionary theory, dismiss/disprove someone’s theory
groundbreaking research, a major research project
present one’s argument, a powerful argument
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